The idea of an application is to give us an idea of you, and "tempting" with donations isn't what we need really. It would be really nice indeed.
And tbh (this is my personal opinion), every gamer have been in a clan/guild or two before. We'd like to hear names, which games etc, not just that it went well.
And where did you mention anything about teamplay in your application?
But you're one of the few, if not the first one that wrote something else than "not realyl", "no" etc. in question 12, I liked that. Put a little effort in it, and explain some of the thing you've already written, and I'm pretty sure you're getting on trial.